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vandana
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0 posted 2004-01-01 09:57 AM



Away
To the song of love
Away
In the wind
Away the sun
Away
To the love
Rainy days
of the yesterday
With a smile
of tomorrow
Away
Upon the sun
Shinning away
Clouds away
The storm
Away the clouds
of yesterdays's song
Ringing my heart away
Singing my heart away
To the away
of yesterday's smile
Memories of you
Away
Away to the love
Love of yesterday
Aaway
Away
The sun
The love
Aaway
to the clouds of
Rainbow
Away


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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-01-01 10:15 AM


Happy New Year Vandana
Anguish is potent in this write.  The prayer of unrelenting stir in the soul.
Sometimes we want silence.
Love is deep...like the sea...
TD

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2 posted 2004-01-01 10:17 AM



A lonesome song, Vandana.
Happy New Year, my friend.

harash
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3 posted 2004-01-01 10:34 AM


Vandana Happy New Year..with this kind write...
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4 posted 2004-01-01 11:48 AM


Pretty! Pretty stuff here! I love it!

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5 posted 2004-01-01 12:43 PM


Vandana, I hope that you and yours have a very
Happy and safe New year!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

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6 posted 2004-01-01 12:44 PM


always a beautiful write from you
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7 posted 2004-01-01 01:03 PM


a beautiful piece of arts! i like the way you play with words! great!

turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again...

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8 posted 2004-01-01 01:22 PM


Rainy days
of the yesterday
With a smile
of tomorrow

love the thought..although the away saddens it

nicely done vandana

Happy New Year to you
M


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9 posted 2004-01-01 04:04 PM


Very lovely, vandana!  
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