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chrissydome
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germany

0 posted 2004-01-01 06:48 AM


woke up on the floor
headed for the door
brushed my teeth and took a shower
now i'll be alive for about an hour

some drinks too many last night
but it felt just alright
danced and laughed till early morn
without the feeling of being torn

greeted the mirror-me
then made myself some tea
i guess that i should go to bed
i think it's better to rest my head

© Copyright 2004 Christina Domene - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2004-01-01 07:34 AM


Happy New Year?

*wince*

mmmhmmm.

Nothing to do for that but lotsa water, aspirin, and mo' sleep.

You'd think I'd take my own advice, huh?

Nah. I've got another hour t'go before I hit dehydration stage.




Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-01-01 07:41 AM


chrissydome
I remember doing that. LOL

icebox
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in the shadows
3 posted 2004-01-01 11:29 AM


"I'd rather have a bottle in front of me
     than a frontal lobotomy."

        ~~~Tom Waits~~~

EvocativeVerse2
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4 posted 2004-01-01 11:35 AM


Happy New Year. Love the poem...but don't think a person needs to drink to have a good time. Not saying a drink is wrong...heck I drink on occassion...just don't think a person needs to get drunk is all. I guess that is just me though.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2004-01-01 11:48 AM


(Hey Ev2 I feel the same...)

this was expressed well

Maureen

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displaced
6 posted 2004-01-01 12:55 PM


every time I drink, I sware I will never drink again

lol
just kidding

I hate hangovers!

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