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chrissydome
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since 2003-11-28
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0 posted 2004-01-01 06:07 AM


you are so beautiful when you are asleep
i can't believe you're lying next to me
i'm inside a moment i forever want to keep
i'm in a place where i forever want to be

i feel completely understood when we talk
you can reach my heart with a single glance
i feel secure with you wherever we walk
still you say we only can be friends

there is nothing that i wouldn't try
sometimes i even feel that i would die
i look at you, it almost makes me cry
i call for you and there is no reply

your touch feels like needles on my skin
your scent cauterizes me from the inside
each smile you give me looks like a false grin
i know it's hard, but i'll have to decide


i'll have to leave you now
although i don't know how
i'll have to free my mind
i'll leave it all behind

i'll miss you when i'm gone
but still i'm moving on
the love for you must die
as you gave no reply

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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
1 posted 2004-01-01 08:30 AM


shouldve pushed for more than friends, in the end untried you most likely will lose it all
harash
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since 2003-12-27
Posts 99
India
2 posted 2004-01-01 10:31 AM


Hey this is all great....
garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-01-01 11:32 AM


chrissydome, since you have not ackowledged your e-mail about overposting that was sent by another Moderator, I reluctantly am posting this here.

This is a quote about our policies on overposting.....

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"Generally speaking, however, I would advise anyone to post no more than three poems in the same forum within a twenty-four hour span. Posting more than that is unfair to the other artists, who would very much like to have their work displayed too, and it's just as unfair to the poet posting too many poems - because they will almost always find they receive little attention and few comments"
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When someone overposts and a moderator has to lock some of the posts, they are unlocked three a day, and bumped back to the front,  until all are unlocked. You reposted two of them already, so I will delete those two that are locked now.

Thank you for your understanding, Chrissy.
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Ethel/garysgirl
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displaced
4 posted 2004-01-01 12:47 PM


yeah chrissy, I know about no replies and moving on
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