What she does..........repost, for the New Year

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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-12-31 02:05 PM

What she does.....

in a blink,
looks east
sun to greet
with smiles

faces south
soul beams
warm heart
dances

casts eyes
westerly
a horizon
seeks her charm

she blinks
faces north
cool winds
kissing cheeks

in the turn
turn of mind
minding turn of time,
a circle
completes,
completely hers
to share
in arms spread wide
encompassing all
with silent prayers
as prayers wing
wing upward

slight in bend
hand to mouth
lips to fingertips
a soft kiss
pats the earth
as spirits dance
souls romance
and fantasies prance

a circle begins
with hands in touch,
seek her blink, then
she is
gone

~*~
Slightly revised

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-31-2003 02:13 PM).]

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

1 posted 2003-12-31 02:24 PM

Nice images, though I have one complaint that is certainly not limited to this poem. I know that many people will disagree with me, but I detest the use of fancy colored fonts. The strength of the poem is the words. That's what a poem is, and attempts to improve one's literary work by visual means is not only ineffective, but distracting. Just give me the poem, and let it stand upon its own merit. I don't mean to offend or criticize anyone. I am merely stating my opinion.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-12-31 02:25 PM

Oh my how beautiful is this dear sister of my heart??!!
And, look at your new picture! WHOOOHOOO!
All the best to you and yours in 2004!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-12-31 02:27 PM

cant keep the blink too long, i know this
happy and healthy to you and yours

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-12-31 06:11 PM

Let us all join you in this little moment of
celebration...that we may enjoy and remember
that which we have around us in our lives...

Happy New Year Sun and yours...

vandana