Open Poetry #30 |
For the One that took my heart and Means Nothing to me |
EverRuss Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 66Indiana |
I've been having that dream Missing your face Feeling again Like a mental case I dont know what to do I dont know who to be When I see you out I fall apart In need again and It breaks me heart I dont know what to do I dont know who to be I long to say She and me On the contrary Wont you take me in Wont you take me home Wont you make me one of your own Will you need me Will you love me You dont have to be all alone Ive been up all night thinkin you Ive been losing sight over you I dont know what to do I dont know who to be Dont you leave With unspoken words Dont make me bleed A broken heart I dont know how to cry I dont know how to say I Swear! I long to be She and me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch...this aches |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Russell, I do like your poems. This one sounds like a song. Is it lyrics to one? If not, I'll bet it could be. Hugs, |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
oh... what a lovely poem. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your style is very unique... The power of the emotions comes through very well. Communication of the heart is not always an easy path. Hang in there. ThisDiamond Welcome to Passions. |
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