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desperation |
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chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany 
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he's sitting in the dark a glowing cigarette in his tounge he's staring into the strange world and hopes it won't take too long and though the walls around him are broken and though the people around him are free the wall inside of him is growing soon he won't be able to see she's walking through the streets holding tight to her bottle of coke she doesn't know where she's going and wishes her whole life to be a joke and though the buildings around her are crumbling and though the people around her are new she's caught inside her own narrow building soon she won't be able to get through |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
I'm a little lost with this, but don't worry. I'm a little lost in life, so it all pans out. I'm not sure what you are trying to say with this, but I can see that you are a talent. Keep writing. |
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chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany |
i'm just trying to describe this feeling of being lost and desperate! that's all... turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again... |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
I've felt that way too. I hate feeling that way. |
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