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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-12-31 07:17 AM


The Word

The word is like a seed that grows
Nourished in a mind that sows
Taking shape a flowers bud
Maturing into powers flood.

Notes within a melody
The making of a rhapsody
Colors with a sense of awe
That brings us fullness to the score.

It changes in the raining rhyme
And counts the grains of seining time
Its leaves descends into the soil
And effervesces in the broil

It is a magic path of walk
Within a garden full of talk
Scenting all the odors dwell
Within a heaven or a hell.

It is the feed of human spawn
Until the end and then it’s gone.



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ambrish
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1 posted 2003-12-31 07:30 AM


The word is like a seed that grows
Nourished in a mind that sows
Taking shape a flowers bud
Maturing into powers flood.
     truely said,nice write.

Patricia
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2 posted 2003-12-31 07:50 AM


This is excellent.  The power held within words...it is amazing.  Yet, there are so many that do not understand this power, the impact of one thought from mind to mouth or pen to paper, and how important it is to choose your words carefully...to think before speaking...Sorry, I could on go  forever here.  See what an impact you make with your words!

Absolutely wonderful write, Seymour.

Patricia

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2003-12-31 07:53 AM


and your words...
YOUR words gave us Eden and Shangri-La...
and this moth is everyday grateful that I get to wander in wonder in the garden of your rhymes divine.

Happy New Year to you, Isabel and Randy too.

*ww*

scorpio
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4 posted 2003-12-31 08:48 AM


Your words inspire and enlighten, Sy.  Happy New Year my friend.

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-12-31 09:01 AM



Within the seek of words from thee
I see behind you 2003
and you have walked up to the door,
to welcome in 2004...

Thank you Sy...


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-31-2003 09:03 AM).]

vandana
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6 posted 2003-12-31 09:28 AM


enjoyed
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-12-31 09:35 AM


ambrish
Thank you for the read and reply.

Patricia
What a wonderful reply, thank you dear.


JM,
Thank you love and a happy New Year to you and yours. By the way I mailed your package ysterday and you should get it by saturday
or monday. WWRS

scorpio,
Thank you dear and a very Happy New Year to you.

Sunshine,
Clever reply, and a very Happy New Year to you.


Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-12-31 09:36 AM


vandana
Thank you a a Happy New Year to you.

Enchantress
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9 posted 2003-12-31 10:02 AM


Ah Sy...thank you for taking me through
just about every day of 2003 with your wise
words!
May you and Isabel have a wonderful,
peaceful and healthy New Year!
~Smiles, Hugs, a quick New Year's kiss...
and let's not forget the tea.~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-12-31 10:21 AM


Words are wonderful, aren't they Seymour?
I have thouroughly enjoyed reading your
wonderful words in rhyme this year.....
I look forward to reading many more of them next year!!
May you and yours have a very Happy 2004!!
Hugs to you, my friend        
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-12-31 10:34 AM


Nancy
Thank you for the tea in 2003
And hope for more in 2004


Ethel
And hugs to you my friend and a very Happy New Year.

Martie
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12 posted 2003-12-31 10:46 AM


Sy

"It is a magic path of walk
Within a garden full of talk
Scenting all the odors dwell
Within a heaven or a hell."

so true!

and your words flow with magic consistancy...what do you feed that muse of yours?  Happy New Year, dear poet!  

Bonnie j
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13 posted 2003-12-31 11:12 AM


Lovely.
Words have the power to enrich our soul. Touch us with love, joy, tears and overbearing sorrow. Thank you for sharing your words of poetry.
Bon-Bon

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-12-31 01:18 PM


Martie
Thank you dear and a very Happy New Year.


Bonnie,
Happy New Year.

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