Open Poetry #30 |
The Word |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Word The word is like a seed that grows Nourished in a mind that sows Taking shape a flowers bud Maturing into powers flood. Notes within a melody The making of a rhapsody Colors with a sense of awe That brings us fullness to the score. It changes in the raining rhyme And counts the grains of seining time Its leaves descends into the soil And effervesces in the broil It is a magic path of walk Within a garden full of talk Scenting all the odors dwell Within a heaven or a hell. It is the feed of human spawn Until the end and then it’s gone. |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
The word is like a seed that grows Nourished in a mind that sows Taking shape a flowers bud Maturing into powers flood. truely said,nice write. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is excellent. The power held within words...it is amazing. Yet, there are so many that do not understand this power, the impact of one thought from mind to mouth or pen to paper, and how important it is to choose your words carefully...to think before speaking...Sorry, I could on go forever here. See what an impact you make with your words! Absolutely wonderful write, Seymour. Patricia |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and your words... YOUR words gave us Eden and Shangri-La... and this moth is everyday grateful that I get to wander in wonder in the garden of your rhymes divine. Happy New Year to you, Isabel and Randy too. *ww* |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Your words inspire and enlighten, Sy. Happy New Year my friend. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Within the seek of words from thee I see behind you 2003 and you have walked up to the door, to welcome in 2004... Thank you Sy... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-31-2003 09:03 AM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ambrish Thank you for the read and reply. Patricia What a wonderful reply, thank you dear. JM, Thank you love and a happy New Year to you and yours. By the way I mailed your package ysterday and you should get it by saturday or monday. WWRS scorpio, Thank you dear and a very Happy New Year to you. Sunshine, Clever reply, and a very Happy New Year to you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you a a Happy New Year to you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sy...thank you for taking me through just about every day of 2003 with your wise words! May you and Isabel have a wonderful, peaceful and healthy New Year! ~Smiles, Hugs, a quick New Year's kiss... and let's not forget the tea.~ In the midst of winter.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Words are wonderful, aren't they Seymour? I have thouroughly enjoyed reading your wonderful words in rhyme this year..... I look forward to reading many more of them next year!! May you and yours have a very Happy 2004!! Hugs to you, my friend Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy Thank you for the tea in 2003 And hope for more in 2004 Ethel And hugs to you my friend and a very Happy New Year. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "It is a magic path of walk Within a garden full of talk Scenting all the odors dwell Within a heaven or a hell." so true! and your words flow with magic consistancy...what do you feed that muse of yours? Happy New Year, dear poet! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Lovely. Words have the power to enrich our soul. Touch us with love, joy, tears and overbearing sorrow. Thank you for sharing your words of poetry. Bon-Bon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Thank you dear and a very Happy New Year. Bonnie, Happy New Year. |
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