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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Warm Words I look across this plane a featureless vast quiet and cold . . . In the long distant view a red flow carries warm words I pour flat champagne as if it still mattered in this dry oasis and await the sirocco of your verse Awaken me from my chill © 123103 |
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lovejunkie Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 93Indiana |
I like it but could you give me a little more hint what its about? i think i could enjoy it more. it's too early in the morning to think. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautifully aching |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I hope those warm words come your way  M |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
enjoyed it. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Love, Light and Happiness... Best Wishes, Great write! TD |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh I know this quiet ache. The flat champagne says alot about the silence. Just Beautiful~ |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Whew...I can feel those warm breezes from here...very beautiful and delicate. Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany |
so sad and so beautiful! turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again... |
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