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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-12-30 06:44 PM



To be weightless.

To be a shift of air sweeping
faint across your
fingertips.

To be this...

I would leave the ground
behind.

And fly to only
you.

~

( For you)

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-12-30 06:51 PM



See?  This is romantic poetry
at its best.  Short, simple...
forever endearing.

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-12-30 06:56 PM


Beautiful!!  Simply beautiful!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
3 posted 2003-12-30 07:09 PM


To be your breath

And fall closely
beside your heart

Each time you
say my name.

To be this...

I would surely
vanish

Upon a
whispered vow.
Thank you, dear Eric...


This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

[This message has been edited by jaicie114 (12-30-2003 07:10 PM).]

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-12-31 04:33 AM


ah yes

beauty at its finest

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2003-12-31 06:37 AM


Lovely, Eric

M

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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Missouri
6 posted 2003-12-31 07:58 AM


How beautiful, Eric.  What a romantic heart you have...

Patricia

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
7 posted 2003-12-31 12:07 PM


Weightless,
softly,
on butterfly wings,
we are airborne
into the dimension
of Love
... our Home.

Dear Eric, your beautiful words  have wings ... they fly across distance and land right in my heart.
I love you, Margherita


ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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8 posted 2003-12-31 07:06 PM


Another magical write.
Loved this. TD

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