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Remedy |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Startled by the drums ahead Vanished, Peter Pan slips keep away Silent under dew drop hats the mushrooms pray Out of sight…only out of sight While I was looking up My feet following the rhythm Happily to dance the rise Singing under dew drop skies Out of sight…only out of sight Spray painted fog The earth moves keeping time Lost among the jungle vine Silence sets to hold me singular In a plural percussion…fading light Out of sight…only out of sight Wandering the sound Footprints warm before me…looking down Crumbs to trail through the veil…not a sound A yellow cap…atop the canopy that welcomes me And from the right, stroke my cheek, a giggle blows And from my toes…the morning rose Out of sight…only out of sight Copyright Kkh 12/30/03 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
smiling~ Kathleen love the lighthearted feeling of your words... There are many lines that could inspire me here... "Spray painted fog" wonderful Happy New Year, K hugs M |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Wandering the sound Footprints warm before me…looking down Crumbs to trail through the veil…not a sound A yellow cap…atop the canopy that welcomes me And from the right, stroke my cheek, a giggle blows And from my toes…the morning rose Out of sight…only out of sight Kathleen, I love this sweet, cheerful and playful write. It seemed I could see fairies and Peter Pan skipping around while I was reading. LOL Hugs  Ethel |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh....I loved this one! Eric |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh....I loved this one! Eric |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is a lovely poem - I enjoyed it lots - Paul |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Cute! Juju.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Very lyrical, TD...thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
I like this very much, free of cares and worries, to be a child again... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this...this makes me feel good |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Remedy is what you provided...a panacea for winter blues, light and airy as the first real spring day after a long cold winter. You make me want to dance with your words. Beautiful, TD. Patricia |
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