Open Poetry #30 |
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Why doesn't life make any sence? |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
Why doesn't life make any sence? Why are things always so complicated? I enjoy being freinds But sometimes I wounder What it'd be like if We were more than friends But then I wounder What would happen If it ended? Would we still be friends? Would we end up hating each other Would your parents approve of me? Would mine of you? Maybe I shouldn't wounder any more Maybe I should just tell you how I'm feeling and what I'm thinking about Lil' Angel "There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord." Proverbs 21:30 [This message has been edited by lil' Angel (12-29-2003 03:38 PM).] |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
you probably should do that...nicely written RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB- |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
unfortunately the answer is yes if you were speaking personally.. When I starting writing, I assumed everyone would expect poetry to be written like an exercise. Then I realised the reality is that no matter how well I wrote there would always be someone who disagreed. Then I met cliques where it matters more who you have a pizza with, than how good you can write. Dave |
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EverRuss Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 66Indiana |
I dont know if this poem was writin personally because it sounds like it. The only way for anyone to find answers is confronting the problems. Dont be afraid of what might happen. Russell |
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lovejunkie Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 93Indiana |
If this is a personal poem, I feel your pain. But sometimes telling the person how you feel isnt enough. Sometimes you're just blessed and cursed to be friends. -Steph |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
I think that steph has a poin. That sometimes you are blessed and cursed to be friends. I'm not sure what i'm going to do about it yet, but I think that they are one of those people that i am blessed and cursed to have as a frien Lil' Angel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think about this stuff too |
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