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lil' Angel
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since 2003-11-14
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0 posted 2003-12-29 03:38 PM


Why doesn't life make any sence?
Why are things always so complicated?
I enjoy being freinds
But sometimes I wounder
What it'd be like if
We were more than friends
But then I wounder
What would happen
If it ended?
Would we still be friends?
Would we end up hating each other
Would your parents approve of me?
Would mine of you?
Maybe I shouldn't wounder any more
Maybe I should just tell you how
I'm feeling and what I'm thinking about

Lil' Angel


"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord."  Proverbs 21:30


[This message has been edited by lil' Angel (12-29-2003 03:38 PM).]

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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2003-12-30 11:05 PM


you probably should do that...nicely written

RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB-

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2003-12-30 11:22 PM


unfortunately the answer is yes if you were speaking personally..

When I starting writing, I assumed everyone would expect poetry to be written like an exercise.

Then I realised the reality is that no matter how well I wrote there would always be someone who disagreed.

Then I met cliques where it matters more who you have a pizza with, than how good you can write.

Dave

EverRuss
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since 2003-12-31
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Indiana
3 posted 2003-12-31 01:13 AM


I dont know if this poem was writin personally because it sounds like it. The only way for anyone to find answers is confronting the problems. Dont be afraid of what might happen.


Russell

lovejunkie
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since 2003-12-31
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Indiana
4 posted 2003-12-31 01:15 AM


If this is a personal poem, I feel your pain. But sometimes telling the person how you feel isnt enough. Sometimes you're just blessed and cursed to be friends.

-Steph

lil' Angel
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5 posted 2003-12-31 01:47 AM


I think that steph has a poin.  That sometimes you are blessed and cursed to be friends.  I'm not sure what i'm going to do about it yet, but I think that they are one of those people that i am blessed and cursed to have as a frien

Lil' Angel


"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord."  Proverbs 21:30



passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-12-31 03:54 AM


I think about this stuff too
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