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Do You Still Know Me?
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Do You Still Know Me? |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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Do You Still Know Me? Lifted from my mind, souvenirs of time when words trickled in fertile flow A time long ago When wisdoms would sing breezy Verses of Spring, Unobstructed by unacceptance ‘Twas a time, I know Whence, By the same silken silver string. Under a single stream, one marvelous moon beam, We shared moments as adventures unafraid to be traced, looped and laced for all to see When by my words, you had known me. Now years have passed, we’ve grown apart Our songs never sung quite as free I ask this question in my heart By my words, do you still know me? [This message has been edited by Patricia (12-30-2003 01:38 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What I like about this, is that it not only pays credence to where we get our start in literary appreciation, but lets the reader think "Yes, I have a book, that gave me just these feelings!" Then the reader is off on a scavenger hunt to find THAT book that turned their world around. For me? Heh. It's Rod! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
we are often reminded... sometimes sadly..of the words or writers who first may have sparked something inside us.. and maybe sometimes wonder as well if the words we shared at some point or time actually are remembered... and if the person knows us still, through what we said or wrote.. nicely done... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patricia Each moment is similar but not quite the same. Enjoyed Happy New Year |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
unafraid to be traced, looped and laced for all to see those were the days... Happy New Year, Patricia hugs M |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What a beautiful flow of words! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is sad for me...but so beautiful |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
Now years have passed, we’ve grown apart Our songs never sung quite as free I ask this question in my heart By my words, do you still know me? lovely. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
During the holidays, I thought of several people who have come and gone in my life, ......it does make you wonder. You wrote the feeling so well Patricia. A thoughtful poem indeed~ *enjoyed* |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I guess sometimes its needed... to find our own words, in light of everything. You certain have, and they are beautiful Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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LiquidMidnight Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 50 |
I enjoyed this one very much. I really like the form. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is always a time for doubting ... a moment's melancholy. But your words, dear Patricia, hold still magic .... no doubt here. Love, Margherita |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Excellently expressed how over time , people do change , some things are never quite the same Hope |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...James |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* it feels like a dream never quite fulfilled...Wonderful writing... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Unobstructed by unacceptance" I loved that phrase especially; really loved the whole poem. Great and warm read, inspiring. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Brava! Brava! |
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