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Michelle_loves_Mike
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0 posted 2003-12-29 11:21 PM



We rush for the weekend...
T.G.I.F...
We look forward to time off, vacations,,,and the like,,
do we honor our past with thought,,,
ponder what we've learned
see where the past teaches the future,,,,
most are so busy striving for tomorrow,
they forget yesterday,,,,
and today,,is a forgotten post-it note...
a memo rushed thru,,,,,
a school play missed in a meeting....
such a prize is tomorrow,,,,,
that we overlook the treasure,
that was yesterday,,,,

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2003-12-30 01:05 AM


such a prize is tomorrow,,,,,
that we overlook the treasure,
that was yesterday,,,,

So true, makes me wonder, what's the rush!!
Seeing that we can only go so fast, in the fast lane.

Good poem Michelle~

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Saluting with misty eyes
2 posted 2003-12-30 02:57 PM


Yeah, yeah... whatever... as if anyone believes this tripe... oh... uh... hmmmmmm...... I guess you really make a few outstanding points here... and, uh... it's actually extremely well written...
*thinking*
Hey, this is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!! It's the most amazing thing I've ever read!!! I can't wait to read more of it!!!! Keep up the good work...
I know, I know... you're gonna hug me, right?? lol
*hugs*

Cause in my dreams it's always there
The evil face that twists my mind
And brings me to despair.

Daniel van Vliet
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3 posted 2003-12-30 04:41 PM


good write.
garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-12-30 05:06 PM


such a prize is tomorrow,,,,,
that we overlook the treasure,
that was yesterday,,,,


Michelle, I liked this poem. It
made you want to stop and think.
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-12-30 05:15 PM


a very well written poem that caused me to stop and ponder and I love to do that - this is very good - thanks Paul
SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-12-30 05:40 PM


So true. Time is a commodity. Once it's gone you can't get it back, and the more time goes by the more I think to myself I have to make it all count. Thanks for reminding me of this. The older I get the more I see how much it really matters, too. Great big hug for the reminder....
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

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7 posted 2003-12-31 10:48 AM


Yeah, you're right. Too often, we DO rush through things with no thought of what we're doing with that moment. At the risk of sounding like Jedi Master Yoda: Always mindful of the moment, you must be.

Live each momemt like it will be your last one, that way, you ensure that you do not lose the beauty of life, or the beauty of the moment.

Very wisely said, and very well put.


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