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Ashley79
Junior Member

since 2003-12-28

Posts 13
IL, USA

0 posted 2003-12-29 10:10 PM

You took him away from me, but can I ask why?
Now all I can picture is an image in the sky.

He is my guardian angel always and forever.
We will always hold a sibling bond together.

Why did you pick me to survuve on this frightful
earth? Why did david have to die so soon after
birth?

A part of me is gone that I never had time to know.
Why did you choose him to go?

I needed someone to take his place to help me
survive. you put many goals ahead of me which help
me to strive.

I travel through this questionable land alone with
no one to hold my hand. I needed someone to help
me stand.

I know he watches over me day in and day out. One
thing I never know is waht he is thinking about.

I go through every celebration, Holiday, and
birthday as one. At times I need to get away from
it all, run.

I have so many questions, but no where to turn. I
need someone to teach me so I can learn.

All of my friends wonder who you really are. I
answer, "Just like me, but off in the far."

David, I wish you were by my side everyday. When I
was little, I always needed someone to play.

Watch over me when I am in trouble. Protect me with
your giant love bubble.

Hopefully, we can meet again and be a family, four
persons in one. Finally, my dad's wish will be granted. He will have a son.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-12-29 10:23 PM

Ashley, please check your e-mail.
Thank you.
garysgirl
Moderator/Passions In Poetry

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-12-31 10:11 AM

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2003-12-31 11:07 AM

ashley,

this moved me to tears. hugs to you
dear...if i'm understanding this correctly,
this is about you and your twin, and one
of you lived and the other didn't..am
i right? anyway beautiful poem, though
very sad but that is okay too...write it
out dear.

take care,
amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

4 posted 2003-12-31 11:17 AM

Ashley,

This is such an emotional write, thanks for sharing it with us.

Hugs,
~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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5 posted 2003-12-31 12:53 PM

very touching

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