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This Ring
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This Ring |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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It isn't much and it's just one thing, But it's what matters and comes with this ring. I know it may not be a big deal to you, But this ring shows my choice to be true. You may like it you may not, But this ring says with you is my spot. It's just a little tiny jewel and rock, But with this ring to you my heart does flock. And if things become unclear look back at the start, This ring was a gift to you from my heart. This ring isn't everything I know, But it IS one way to be able to show. Just what you mean to me, With this ring.... RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB- |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well she is a very lucky girl as your heart is truly sparkling through the stone presented with that ring. Nicely done, and I hope she loves it! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh huge sigh here! Lucky lucky woman. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
well written poem Lil' Angel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very beautiful love poem. I enjoyed reading it.  Hugs,  Ethel |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
the love represented by that ring,,,,is felt, and it feels wonderful hold onto that feeling, it will get you thru alot,,,,good read Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sounds good! Happy New Year! |
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