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desperation - lines of me
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desperation - lines of me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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a breeze just blew across my knees proof that I've some feeling left let me sip again m'friend perhaps it just ain't hit me yet-- the comfort of the spine reposed apple peeling letter C fetal repositioning simple cell remembering comfort in alone... "It's true, it's true, that I am doomed-- gypsies placed a curse on me--" augury of lemon seed bloating in this amber greed and ashes don't taste bad afloat. Remember that the mirror spoke kindly under red tint shade and eyes were so mysterious bored behind a smudge of smoke wincing at the same old joke bouncing ice with poke of straw downlid curtsey lashed demure Guess-which-hand? of fists in clench, see if you can find the prize. That one? Are you very sure? I open, show the lines of me. Sorry. Nope. You lose again. The empty palm boasts innocence. I never had a thing to hide, but oh, I know, you wanted it... C'mon love. Buy me a drink? and this time, if you like, I'll lie... [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (12-29-2003 05:17 AM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I'll buy you a drink for a lie Karen.You know I love both.  Jason |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
There you go.....!!!!!!!!!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What vignettes are painted here... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a breeze just blew across my knees proof that I've some feeling left let me sip again m'friend perhaps it just ain't hit me yet-- the comfort of the spine reposed apple peeling letter C fetal repositioning simple cell remembering comfort in alone... "It's true, it's true, that I am doomed-- gypsies placed a curse on me--" augury of lemon seed bloating in this amber greed and ashes don't taste bad afloat. ================================= on that thread in pip lounge...you asked about writing from a personal view.... If you ever stop? .... you'll have a mad crazy moth all over you.   and sheesh....what you do with metaphors makes me moth giddy. I can remember Forever December, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Lie to me...always. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Ser. Also love Dunc's response. well done. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This cries out for Lautrec and Poe, absinthe and laudanum. dance the demons spinning time seeking their release in rhyme while death tallies up our crimes and waits for us so patiently... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"It's true, it's true, that I am doomed-- I often feel this way, Karen... M |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"The empty palm boasts innocence. I never had a thing to hide, but oh, I know, you wanted it... C'mon love. Buy me a drink? and this time, if you like, I'll lie..." Thanks you...  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Quite a dance between yours and Duncan's writings! Liked both! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Remember that the mirror spoke kindly under red tint shade and eyes were so mysterious bored behind a smudge of smoke wincing at the same old joke bouncing ice with poke of straw downlid curtsey lashed demure Always each word a sheer diamond. hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"a mad crazy moth all over me" That sounds kinkily appealing at the moment.  Happy New Year to all. and Duncan? Oh yeah baby, I knew you'd understand this one. Thanks for reading, good poet people. I love you all. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"a breeze just blew across my knees proof that I've some feeling left let me sip again m'friend perhaps it just ain't hit me yet-- the comfort of the spine reposed apple peeling letter C fetal repositioning simple cell remembering comfort in alone..." Yep...what JM said...don't ever stop... Love ya, lady...  "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
*sigh* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh yes... I love how your mind works... Happy New Year to you as well! Luv ya! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"the comfort of the spine reposed apple peeling letter C fetal repositioning simple cell remembering comfort in alone..." This part wouldn't leave me alone... I had to come back and read it again I think I need to 'remember'... Love you... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool ending! |
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