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lil' Angel
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0 posted 2003-12-29 02:44 AM



Through the days
From morning to night
You're in my thoughts
From begining to end
I'll never forget you
You were my first true love
You will never leave my heart
And I'll alwyas remember you
No matter where you are

Lil' Angel


"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord."  Proverbs 21:30



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iliana
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1 posted 2003-12-29 02:46 AM


You're right about that, we never do forget our first true love, do we?  Have a happy 2004!

[This message has been edited by iliana (12-29-2003 02:46 AM).]

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-12-29 02:49 AM


lil' Angel, I think that when we have been in love
with someone, there is always a part of them that
stays in our heart. A good write!
Hugs,




"Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters." William Curry http://community.webshots.com/user/toniasmom


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-29-2003 01:34 PM).]

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-12-29 02:55 AM


I think each soul has a purpose and each person enters or touches our lives for a reson..and once that connection is made...they leave a part of them with us..so that we may carry a piece of them in our hearts forever!

~enjoyed....

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

*Belabebeautiful*
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4 posted 2003-12-29 03:14 AM


yes, our first loves stay with us forever..I still remember mine from time to time. Another good one, I really like how you can bring such a good message or meaning from such a short poem...something I tend to fail miserably at! Overall lovely poem.
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 257
India
5 posted 2003-12-29 03:22 AM


And I'll alwyas remember you
No matter where you are
        deep and romantic.

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
6 posted 2003-12-29 05:04 AM


Tells alot about what we keep hidden in our secret place " the heart ", and we can use it to help us further in life, because we learn from each litle second we live and feel.

Smile and happy new year.

Jes / Dreamer


jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
7 posted 2003-12-29 12:55 PM


lil' Angel...

Very sweet verse...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2003-12-29 06:13 PM


Lovely...James
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