Open Poetry #30 |
When Heart Embraces Mind |
harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
When Heart Embraces Mind Loving life, Not quite enough to survive. Something is needed To make Atmosphere alive. Experiences of life, Highs and lows. Drive our emotions To lead and to flow. Every wound, We got from our owns, Bleeds more for the fear, To be left alone. Every milestone Yet Gives us confidence To travel again To retain our crown. Love Begins to grind, When Heart embraces mind. ~~~~*HARASH MAHAJAN*~~~~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Loved it..sometimes the heart rules the mind! ~ARH Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
That is a beautiful poem
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, I agree with ARH...sometimes the mind is controlled completely by the heart. That can be both good and bad. A very thought-provoking poem. I really enjoyed reading. Hugs "Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters." William Curry |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
I really enjoyed this...espcecailly the last stanza it just had this powerfull simplicty to it if that makes any sense! Lovely work, nicely done! ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very interesting poem; I especially liked the last verse. BEEEEEEEwell, friend. |
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