Open Poetry #30 |
Blinded |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
the night is getting to dark to see where were going but i'll follow you i'll follow you to ends of the earth... the suns getting to bright to see where were going but i'll follow you blindly blindly be my eyes so all i can feel is you you be my eyes i'm blinded by love... "Hello my name is..Distance..." |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
A nice and open write...lovely to read... |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
I really enjoyed your poem. it was well written |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
If only our hearts had eyes....but we remain blinded by the light of love.. ~ARH Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Love can do that to us, can't it? Hugs, "Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters." William Curry |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sounds like love to me! |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
blinded by love...sigh...I know that feeling. Nicely done I really liked the flow and candince to this piece. wonderful job ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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