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Ashley79
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since 2003-12-28
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IL, USA

0 posted 2003-12-29 12:36 PM


I am not perfect, and I never will be.
My teeth aren't straight, not perfectly white.
I am not the fattest, not the skinniest.
Not the dumbest, not a genius.
Sometimes my hair doesn't flow the right way.
My clothes don't exactly match
but I'm ok with that.
People strive to be perfect, give up their life
just to be someone they aren't and never will be
People complain about their body
And everything else about themselves.
But isn't that a waste of time?
Why complain about something thats natually given?
We're not perfect.

© Copyright 2003 Ashley Rae - All Rights Reserved
harash
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since 2003-12-27
Posts 99
India
1 posted 2003-12-29 01:41 AM


just a perfect write.....
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-12-29 02:54 AM


Ashley, nobody is perfect,
although some people think they are....
or at least, they act like they think so. LOL
Hugs,  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-29-2003 02:55 AM).]

wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
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3 posted 2003-12-29 02:55 AM


very nice
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2003-12-29 03:01 AM


Perfection is only within a loving, giving heart....perfect love...I hate how the media plays on the superficialness of women, and i hate people pretending to be something they are not...love yourself, be yourself...God created you perfect in his eyes and that is all you need.Be unique....be real.

From your poem...you have got it! confidence in a woman who knows herself, loves herself is more beautiful than any bimbo supermodel...

you go girl~girlpower!

~ARH


Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (12-29-2003 03:02 AM).]

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-12-29 05:31 AM



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