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mfchild
New Member

since 2003-12-28

Posts 6
NYC

0 posted 2003-12-28 06:38 PM

Gently

Taste the possibilities
Of our miracle embrace
Through the visions U see
And this state which is surreal
That we feel
It’s not often one reveals
Their deepest secrets
Of their conscience
This could be
A religious threat 2 me
Especially if this 2 U
Is unattractive flattery?

In flight Weightless and effortless
The thought of your kiss
brought me this
I’m high in the sky
And I fear I won’t
Know how to land
If my insecurities
Get the best of me
Keep me in flight
And if I must come down
Please please,
Let it be , ,
Let it be , ,
Gently

Taste the possibilities
Of our embrace
Imagine us
Wrapped around each other tight
Producing multiple echoes
Throughout the night
Rhythmically equaled as one
Our story could be the beautiful one
Cloning this is impossible
Cause only the spiritual
Times the physical
Could create
Such a miracle
Could create
Such a miracle

In flight
Weightless and effortless
The thought of your kiss
brought me this
I’m high in the sky
And I fear I won’t
Know how to land
If my insecurities
Get the best of me
Keep me in flight
And if I must come down
Please please,
Let it be , ,
Let it be , ,
Gently

lyrics by: Paris Mark Toon 4 ButterScotch Blue publishing © 2002

For more information on poetry by Paris Mark Toon please visit www.mothersfavoritechild.com

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2003-12-28 07:37 PM

I noticed 'lyrics' on the bottom of the post. I felt lyrics way before I read that. Really beautiful write. Welcome to PIP.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2003-12-28 08:15 PM

Welcome to Passions...I enjoyed your first contribution and hope to read more.

believe in what your heart feels...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-12-29 12:36 PM

I hope that you enjoy Passions In Poetry.
You are a very good writer and I think you
will enjoy it here. Please check your
e-mail for a greeting from all of us.
Ethel....garysgirl
Moderator/Passions In Poetry

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-12-29 10:48 AM

MFC,

Welcome to passions! Just wanted to let you know I very much enjoyed these lyrics. I await more...

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-12-29 10:51 AM

WELCOME! glad to read and hope to hear in the coming year

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-12-29 11:10 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I very much enjoyed your first post..
and I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2003-12-29 01:04 PM

I sincerely hope you will post more of your work at this site. I went to view your homepage and enjoyed my visit a great deal. You have a lot of talent, good luck to you. Oh, and welcome to Passions, if you are seeking feedback this is a great site to get it.

Happy Holidays
Let there be peace on earth

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-12-29 01:10 PM

awesome!

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