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Open Poetry #30

Finales

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-12-28 11:43 AM

If it’s true that love songs of the past
never last past the moment of regret,
why is it that
I sometimes find myself

listening

for your same old tune?

We were always
out of sync,
without rhyme most the time,
and two steps apart
from a meeting of the heart.

Guess those old tunes have a way
of hiding between the ears and
sliding out into the open
at the least opportune moment.

Finales are known for that.

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2003-12-28 12:11 PM

Midnite....So true...music is like that.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2003-12-28 04:12 PM

so true...so true.

enjoyed this.

Maree

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2003-12-29 02:59 AM

Brava, Brava! Liked mucho!

*Belabebeautiful*

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since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

4 posted 2003-12-29 03:03 AM

so,so true like others have said. I liked the meaning of this poem and the smoothness of the flow. It set me reminiscing of an old flame that tends to pop up now and agian just as you described. Wonderful poem!
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-12-29 04:39 AM

I'm glad I'm not the only one that feels that way

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-12-29 08:23 AM

Thanks ladies! An oldies but goodies kinda tune yanked this one out of me.

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