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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Immersed Immersed in phrases brought to thought A day dreams wile that brings a smile Withdrawn from out the wind of wrought A fantasy within a file A trip within a sips illusion Flying o’er a field of green Grabbing on a rings conclusion Brings a bouquet of the glean Perhaps a scene in latent hold Held in promise of the clay Perhaps a wish in subtle fold Melted in the warmth of day However the thing it holds a door And brings a turn of heart to brew It touches on the evermore And is the promise of a coup It is the other side, the moon The changing into afternoon |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Seymour, I am always touched by how wonderfully your mind interprets the motions of your heart. You are a never-ending source of beauty. Love, Margherita  Have a beautiful Sunday! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is absolutely lovely Seymour  "I can't believe |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love your daydreams... and inner rhyme all the time...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful morning verse Sy! I'm running late but have time for tea. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Good morning Sy....you always bless us with these little gifts. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sy, You did it again mr King of cool... beautiful poetry, and lovely inner rhyming you did here...as always, a treat to read YOU  Hugs, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "Immersed in phrases brought to thought" Just how it feels reading you!  |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful words and wonderful images here Seymour. I wish you much love and happiness throughout the New Year. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a poet - what a wonderful flow of words perfectly describing the event! lol |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy, your words and thoughts wash over us. Beautiful. believe in what your heart feels... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very light and whisical, i enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear friends, another one of those days. Sorry I couldn't get to each of you. Hope things will straighten out soon. Hugs, kisses and thanks. |
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