Seeking (Perhaps Acrostic)

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Open Poetry #30

Seeking (Perhaps Acrostic)

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

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0 posted 2003-12-27 10:34 PM

     Help me find a way to share
       utilizing whatever has been rendered
         me, primitive gifts of thoughts and words,
           instruments  imperfect,
             lacking skill, lacking learn,
               impossible to fulfill;
                 teach me less to
                   yearn

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (12-28-2003 12:55 PM).]

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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1 posted 2003-12-27 11:08 PM

Yearning's fine I think -- just depends on what you're yearning for. lol

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

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2 posted 2003-12-27 11:15 PM

iliana,
   Gee, you have to be soooo philosophical!
I guess what I yearn for at this moment is to be able to write something which consists of no bungling edits or misspellings.  I hate it when I make mistakes and can't erase them, only to find them days later, blaring out at me! Perhaps, you can see why I wrote HUMILITY diagonally as an attempted acrostic!   Tell the family I said Hi!

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (12-27-2003 11:26 PM).]

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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3 posted 2003-12-27 11:26 PM

Sadie -- well, that really was very clever. It's late and I'm slow -- and I am also the queen of typos -- forgive. XXXXX

[This message has been edited by iliana (12-27-2003 11:27 PM).]

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