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Darlin'
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Darlin' |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA 
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I love you darlin’ I love the world I’m in with you, It couldn’t get much better than this, Just open your heart to me, I’ll listen, I want to wipe away your sadness, Kiss away your tears, Please have no fear, I’ll love you forever darlin’. It hurts me to know you’re hurting inside, Please just let it all out and cry if you need to, I love you, Tell me what’s wrong, Don’t hold it in too long, I love you, Please tell me what to do, To help you fix what’s wrong. You have my heart, You’ve had it from the start, You are a wonderful man, That has won the heart of this woman, Forever... Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so sweet! ah...to be in love *sigh* |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Dixie, I love being in love... It feels sooo good.  I'm glad you liked it and thanks for stopping by.Hugs, ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
lovely ! |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Wintertao, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for replying.Hugs, ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Very nicely put I suppose that we all look for that comfort in our time of need. The words are not just words, they are compassion and love inscribed into someone's soul. You've proven that Disney hadn't lied to us about everything involving love for in your work it truly exist. Beautiful. |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Ravenwolfvoyager, Thank you for your kind words, I say what I feel and hope and pray that people open their eyes and read between the lines like you have done. My hope is that the person I was thinking about when I wrote this opens up and tells me how they feel instead of hiding it so we can save what we have... Thanks for replying. Hugs, ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
The best words in the world Forever... Dave |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, Kelly. I love to read poems that are written from the heart... and yours are.  Hugs,  Ethel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You offer love and compassion and you offer TO LISTEN. That's great, I love your words. Love, Margherita |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Dave - Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Ethel - It tickles me pink to know that you feel that way ... Thank you sooooo much!Margherita - That's one thing I feel I'm good at... listening. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for replying. Hugs to all, ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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