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Open Poetry #30

what dreams lie locked

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-12-27 09:26 AM

What dreams lie locked inside your head,
what treasures hide ‘neath midnight’s bed?
When owls do screech and whales do breach,
what stories dance just out of reach?

If only you could release them from within
the depths of that inner personal prison.
If only they might be allowed to reveal
your inner stamp, your hidden seal.

Your spirit rises in sunshine’s glow,
eyes release darkness that hovered so low,
Let them go, I beg, let them go.
Let go the thoughts, escape the lair,
gift them freedom to roam where’ere.
Be not so tight fisted, be not restrained,
for to hold dreams too tightly is to be totally contained.

What dreams lie locked inside your head,
What treasures need release from midnght’s bed?

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-27-2003 09:30 AM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-12-27 09:28 AM

Now what is this? Kismet? Gads...
first Sy, now you...or am I just destined
to go back to my dreams of the night,
for a specific reason?

How did you know?

Very good write, Kacy!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-12-27 09:30 AM

LOL, glad you enjoyed this one.
Now, let those dreams fly.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-12-27 11:07 AM

If only they might be allowed to reveal
your inner stamp, your hidden seal.

Liked those lines a lot,
if only our dreams could fly!

Nice poem Kacy girl~

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