Open Poetry #30 |
Challenge #1 - Larry's challenge |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I took up Larry's challenge and will write them all Flattery versus Praise, - challenge 1 I hate it when they flatter me and don’t mean what they say I'd rather see they shut their mouth and let me go my way I make mistakes and goodness grief, I'm glad I do you know That means that I am still alive and that my mind will grow To say "I'm sorry" is no sinn, I've said it many times If I was wrong then they should know, I write them little rhymes But I don't say what I don't mean, no flattery words from me When I say "Nice", when it is not, I'd kill the thruth you see I love it though when you praise me for something I have done My self esteem will raise a bit and sure that will be fun But when the praise will be my goal, then there is something wrong Then I won't act with heart and soul, but that's a different song When you hear "Good" then look into the eyes of who spoke free And you will know at once my dear, it's praise or flattery Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (12-27-2003 09:33 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is an excellent challenge, Titia... one that everyone should attempt... Well done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Titia! Challenege well met! Hope you had a great Christmas. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
YES! Into my library with this write, Titia. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Titia, this is very good!! You did an excellent job of meeting the challenge. Hugs, Ethel |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So VERY true! |
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