Open Poetry #30 |
Mocking Me |
WannabePoet Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 62New York USA |
As I gazed out the frosty sliding glass doors at the snow covered landscape Something extraordinary caught my eye In the sea of pure white, there it stood Tall, proud, looking majestic and even rather smug It was the one thing, we had forgotten to put away for it’s well deserved, long winter rest It stood there in all its glory It’s blackness almost rebelling against the ocean of white With its slightly rusted cast iron frame dully reflecting off the sparkling snow crust Its portly belly hung open wide As if just beckoning for a flame It sported a scarf of powdery white Around it’s slim neck This rested upon its rotund body Upon it’s head a hat of snow as if creating a thinking cap It’s filigree door, stood slightly ajar Allowing a blanket of snow to cover its inner grates It painted a rather poetic pose Just challenging me to suppose It… could just as well be me It called on my muse to immediately compose There it confidently stood, for all to see Looking for all the world, like it was mocking me It stood in stark contrast to the blanket of white Poking out bravely Challenging all the purity and beauty of the new fallen snows This lackluster, cold black, emotionless, yet hauntingly beautiful, cast iron stove Standing on its own, Lonely, Waiting, Hoping For that start up flame To come and light its fire From deep within |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
nice to read how a simple object can become something else...continue with your poems |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nothing "wannabe" about you. The poem held me all of the way through, and you gave animation to a lifeless object. Well done! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Tobi, I enjoyed reading this. I could almost see the stove sitting there in the snow looking at you. LOL Very good writing!! Hugs, Ethel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is absolutely going into my library! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this! Fantastic imagery...held my attention all the way through. Nothing 'wannabe' about you... You 'are' a poet! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
sometimes,,,we miss the beauty right in front of us,,,,your words give majesty to a quiet feeling Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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