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Beyond the bend... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
*~Beyond the Bend~* Sitting there veiled in a state bewildered, confused, sad and alone no friend nor home is near to you just a yearning for what is dear gazing outward into mist of night across the etchings of concrete lines where once drawn in pastel hues of love known to you as true now faded onto concrete rock... The underworld if truth be known can sometimes be a lonely place each passing night you lay awake in restless sleep wondering all the while if you will trust again you often choose to seek retreat inside the dream of what could be ahead of you beyond the bend where new beginnings shall one day unfold... *~coco~*  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
hmmpphhhh - I thought this was going to be a poem about Balladeer or Toerag or both of them being around the bend, over the hill, gone to weeds, etc. Instead, you write this pretty poem that's not about either of them (except the title, of course). Nice piece of writing though. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This has a lovely lilt when read aloud coco. I enjoyed it very much and it is such a pleasure to read your words again! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
LngJhnAg... I can't stop giggling at what you write though I must admit you've got a sweet thought of PoetFriend Balladeer/Toerag "beyond the bend" as it could make an interesting poem  GentleSpirit... you're a sweetheart PoetFriend Thanx4stopping by *~smiles2u*~ [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (12-16-2003 03:31 PM).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
well well well...it is about time you got back here... there are many wonderful things beyond the bend...h |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sad and alone no friend nor home is near to you just a yearning for what is dear touched me~~ nice to read you again*s M |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Thanks! I needed to hear this. It was a very good write. I sort of feel like that now. You described this extremely well! Great job! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hello Coco my friend, it's been awhile. This suits my mood this holiday season, sad, but with a little hope. Somewhere. smiles and hugs, dear lady. I have missed your name in these scrolls.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CoCoBaci~ You KNOW that this is an early Christmas present for me !!!! Just seeing you here (and playing in the archives) is a *gift* indeed~ BEAUTIFUL poem dear lady~ Merriest of Holidays to you and yours~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
coco, i've missed your work so much, and this is a perfect reason why...this is just beautiful! Happy Holidays, Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sitting there veiled in a state bewildered, confused, sad and alone no friend nor home is near to you just a yearning for what is dear gazing outward into mist of night across the etchings of concrete lines where once drawn in pastel hues of love known to you as true ================= Classic Coco poetry...bittersweetly beautiful! HEY YOU!!  whats up girlie?? welcome back to poetry land. Happy Holiday wishes going out to you too. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SweetSweetPoetFriends, you're sooooooooo special and dear2me... I've missed every1of you a whole bunch this past while but truth is as cliche as this may sound "you're ALWAYS in my heart" wherever the path takes me one thing has never changed and that is YOU, my PoetFriends, are a constant in my life and I'm just tickled pink that things are settling down so that I may be around here for many days/months/years to come... HeartHugs2u ~*1slick, NakdThoughts, Kristabell, Serenity, Marge, Aimster and JanetMarie... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching write...I feel this |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PassingShadows, I thank you very much for taking a peak at this thread... Smiles2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm glad I went looking for you, this is such a beautiful poem Missy, that runs true to life for many I'm sure. Aww... but your title says it all, there's no telling what lies around the bend. I wish you joy and good cheer, CocoBaci~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful to see you again PoetFriend Coco. . . you have been missed. . .and this, this is why. . . --------------------------------------------------- I am tired . . . |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Indeed your presence has been missed. ‘Tis good to read you again, awesome as always. Take care! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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