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risen
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0 posted 2003-12-26 07:29 PM


Written with the images of The anti globiliswayation protests in genoa, in which a protestor was murdered by a rent a cop.

its a strange style, yet hopefully it brings out the pain and emotions within the subject.

anyway, hope you enjoy

Notes from Genoa

one line
the separation
between the people and the dream
a time ahead
against the order
a self reliance
free, no borders
a look ahead,
yet over shoulders

Charge!

Spontanious, reaction
stench of fear
Down with the old
down with YOUR new
authority
a lie
the line
stretched, not broken
a call
Death
still as a swamp

Retreat

a battle lost
dead
one shot
a communtity morns
the world
stunned
no lies anymore
your sins on film
no questions

Regroup

Movement,
amassed, we lie
the night will come
bigger, faster
submit
its your turn now
we lived repressed
its your turn now

Charge!

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wordwizard
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1 posted 2003-12-26 07:46 PM


welcome to Passions..its good to read about soome of the new challenges we face and to learn how to deal with the best way we can...
globalization is a touchy subject.


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2 posted 2003-12-26 08:03 PM


Hi, and Welcome to Passions.  We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….


such a sad but realistic write....

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Kindly

Greeneyes~     


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This morning there’s a calm
I can’t explain-
By the time I recognize this
moment it will be gone  
I will bend light
pretending it lingers on




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JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-01-10 11:31 PM


Nice writing...James
ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-01-11 12:27 PM


Powerful style.
Enjoyed your entrance.
Welcome to Passions.
ThisDiamond

iliana
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5 posted 2004-01-11 01:04 AM


Really descriptive and well written!
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6 posted 2004-01-11 01:33 AM


It's always easier to tear down than to build -- as the security guard learned so tragically, and the protestor already knew.

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7 posted 2004-01-12 11:16 AM






(big hugggsssssss) It is tragic indeed to see peoples rights, including in the so-called "democracy" here in America, get rejected and silenced like this? What's next, Kate Raphael getting banished entirely from the Middle East as the Apartheid Wall only divides them further? It is disgusting! Thank you for this powerful debut, God Bless You for charging on through the grace of poetry! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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