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Jes
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0 posted 2003-12-26 01:27 PM



Sometimes love is all we need....
And then we wipe our head yes indeed.

But sometime after we open up our soul....
And we cant understand, but we find this hole.

Our heart didnt be what it seemed alike....
This is and was our life yike.

But today i learned there is a difference in life....
We do not have to be husband and wife.

Love is a thing nothing we can built....
So left of all is the sweetness of our guilt.

To tell how the story ended....
No one can tell how many years we pretended.

But we stil love the way, to do sex....
Soon she will maybe be my ex.

Smile

Jes


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-12-26 01:48 PM


oh Jes, this is very well done

There is a difference between love and sex and sometimes for some people it's hard to tell

I have defined the difference in myself and know now where the line is. It's a hard truth to face.

I wish you lots of Love to you in this season, my friend ...and if parting is to be, then smile and carry on.

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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2 posted 2003-12-26 02:08 PM


Thank you Passing

Smile yes there is a difference, i found it too smile..

Me and my wife both know we have to go apart, so we just need to find the moment it will be.

Smile

Jes and tahnks for ya comment.


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