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Michelle_loves_Mike
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0 posted 2003-12-22 10:32 PM


I don't hear it,,,,I feel it,,,,
the taste is a sound I remember.
Soul deep,,,
It whispers thru my whole being..
It dances across my heart,,,
Forever isn't long enough...
To feel the warmth of your love...
Eternity is but a wink,,,,
Compared to the safty of your arms...
Pain forgotten,
Healed by your whispers...
Promises i believe..
So simple,,so true.....
A simple whisper...

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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Sadelite
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1 posted 2003-12-22 10:50 PM


I don't hear it,,,,I feel it,,,,
the taste is a sound I remember.

I started here, but could have copied the whole thing to express how I well I liked it!
    
Merry Christmas,
          Sadelite

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-12-23 01:18 AM


A beautiful and heartfelt write this is....
I loved it and am sure the one it is written
for loves it as well!!
Hugs and

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2003-12-26 02:02 PM


So many nice lines in this....
Thank you for sharing the whisper of love!

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