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Open Poetry #30

tree

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2003-12-25 11:27 PM

treekarmatree
karma
winterpristine
bones and bones
and strength crytsal-
lean
buddy
gonna bud
budding in the
Spring
live a lifetime
every Year
drop off-
spring
to soilschoolsoil
have a mirror
to bluesky thumbprints and
(dee
and)
hey!
they looksee
just
like me and summerbloom
en(velope)viroment
the villagestage troupe
will help you cope
come alongvining with me
we will drop our leaving
in the same place

  fall
leave with
   some
or
leaven
breeds a cold windup
tree
   lives a
boldyear

canwe?

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

1 posted 2003-12-26 12:55 PM

This is new to me...and tests my ability to recognize familiarity in the changing seasons..best of holidays to you Brian and a Happy New Year.

ecrivan

[This message has been edited by wordwizard (12-26-2003 12:56 AM).]

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2003-12-26 12:57 PM

Wow, this is cool! I had to read it a few times. Nothing like that ever comes outa my pen, dang it. Would like to hear you sing it.... keeping it.... ~K~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-12-26 01:07 AM

"treekarmatree"

with this intro you introduced your readers to an active spirit of "tree".

It's just those little things, baby, that leave me floundering under clever subtle impact.

You sculpt, madviking, you sculpt.