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Open Poetry #30

Isabella

Kazeru
Junior Member

since 2003-12-16

Posts 31

0 posted 2003-12-24 01:40 PM

Imagine sweetness
So innocent pure
Awaken now, my Goddess
Bestow upon us your smile
Everlasting beyond time
Lasting forever in a
Life of beauty being
Always just who you are

You are the one I speak of
Only a Goddess can be true
Unisons of beauty and art

After all these fairytales
Reading them while I was young
Even then I did believe them

Divinely speaking
Imagination can’t understand
Vivid as it maybe
Intentionally I softly utter
Nothing but praises
Eternally

->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

1 posted 2003-12-24 03:51 PM

sweet !

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-12-24 06:39 PM

Lovelly...James

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2003-12-26 02:56 AM

Very full of adoration -- I could feel it!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-12-26 04:17 AM

very romantic

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

5 posted 2003-12-26 06:30 AM

Bestow upon us your smile
Everlasting beyond time
so beautiful.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-12-26 02:01 PM

A very lovely Acrostic!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-12-26 02:16 PM

That is some high praise,
and a very beautiful poem~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2003-12-26 02:18 PM

Kazeru....I think this is beautifully done!

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