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Steve Motuel
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since 2003-12-19
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0 posted 2003-12-25 06:13 PM


The realm in which my life is held
Binds me to you just like a weld
It holds me tight and won't let go
I can't break free and want it so

I need your love like air to live
And in return my love I'll give
The whole of it and not just part
I sacrifice to you my heart

Show me a sign please let me see
What's in that heart of yours for me
I can't believe that I am wrong
Our love flows free just like a song

My world would end should you decide
To turn away from me and hide
I've never felt this way before
In me you've opened every door

Each day I wait seems like a year
And mighty grows in me the fear
I know that you've a way to go
My candle burns for you, you know

My love burns bright and true for you
The darkness in your life shines through
To light the way for your return
And on that day, oh how you'd learn

Within my heart there is a place
For such as you with your sweet face
For such as you with your big heart
And never, ever more to part

Be mine my love my Angel sweet
My life I lay before your feet
My love for you is not a dream
I love you so, my heart could scream


[This message has been edited by Steve Motuel (12-25-2003 06:21 PM).]

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-12-25 06:25 PM


Yes, your love is felt in these lovely words!
And there is a nice rhythm too.
Love, Margherita

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-12-25 08:43 PM


Steven~
Such a lovely rhyme scheme in this penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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