Open Poetry #30 |
Be mine my love my Angel sweet |
Steve Motuel Member
since 2003-12-19
Posts 72Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany |
The realm in which my life is held Binds me to you just like a weld It holds me tight and won't let go I can't break free and want it so I need your love like air to live And in return my love I'll give The whole of it and not just part I sacrifice to you my heart Show me a sign please let me see What's in that heart of yours for me I can't believe that I am wrong Our love flows free just like a song My world would end should you decide To turn away from me and hide I've never felt this way before In me you've opened every door Each day I wait seems like a year And mighty grows in me the fear I know that you've a way to go My candle burns for you, you know My love burns bright and true for you The darkness in your life shines through To light the way for your return And on that day, oh how you'd learn Within my heart there is a place For such as you with your sweet face For such as you with your big heart And never, ever more to part Be mine my love my Angel sweet My life I lay before your feet My love for you is not a dream I love you so, my heart could scream [This message has been edited by Steve Motuel (12-25-2003 06:21 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, your love is felt in these lovely words! And there is a nice rhythm too. Love, Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Steven~ Such a lovely rhyme scheme in this penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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