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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-12-22 09:32 PM


Right here upon my heart,
Your kiss
Wing beat paints
Of sacred dove
And placed a wish
Adorned with love
Aglow that seems
To wear me well
So subtle
In its magic spell
Butterflies flutter
One shore to another
A wilderness
Meant to discover
Blue and green
Beset silk screen
Right here upon my heart,
Your kiss

Copyright Kkh 12/22/03

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-12-22 10:01 PM


Oh my Kathleen....this is breathtaking!
Very much enjoyed....all the best this holiday season to you and yours.



Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2003-12-22 10:48 PM


if we could all taste a kiss so sweet,,,life would be grand,,,,

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
3 posted 2003-12-22 11:49 PM


TD...

What an incredibly beautiful image...thank you so much for sharing this.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Kahlil
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4 posted 2003-12-22 11:54 PM


You've captured that feeling SO well!  Very nice write.  ~K~
passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-12-23 02:53 AM


very soft and warm writing
Fire Fairy
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6 posted 2003-12-23 05:22 AM


I really enjoyed this. Thank you. Your style is truly beautiful.


Patricia
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7 posted 2003-12-23 08:06 AM


TD,
I love this...the flow in the way your words fell upon the page is simply wonderful.  Yes, you described the feeling perfectly and beautifully.

Patricia

Ericc
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8 posted 2003-12-23 03:18 PM


Beautiful!!

Eric

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9 posted 2003-12-23 06:39 PM


enjoyed
Magnus
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10 posted 2003-12-25 06:16 PM


When you write love...you make sure you
throw in the kitchen sink and a few more
odd items....ensuring that everything is
there...and in it's rightful place.

Well done K.

Margherita
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11 posted 2003-12-25 06:23 PM


so subtle in its magic spell

Very beautiful.
Love, Margherita

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