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Psssssst .......... Hey You ............. Yes You --->
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Psssssst .......... Hey You ............. Yes You ---> |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
See we got ya catched in a second of thought. Hehe is that how you were taught. When you have to learn to be yaself. Were do you look on which shelf. Hmmm look to the light. Were your smiles shines so bright. Look deep. And your heart will beep. Still you know. Which one of us you show. Let the love for all just grow. In this life were everything is so and so. See ya in a while ----> so keep that pretty smile. Smile Jes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jes Cute write, enjoyed. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile Thanks for reading Seymour im glad you enjoyed. Smile Jes |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Keep on smiling and writing your bright words of poetry. Love Bon-Bon  |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile hehehheh actuallysmiling for real. And I will, I will, smile and write, thanks for ya kind words Bonnie. Smile Jes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Jes, this is such a cute write...I needed the lift up today, thank you |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile Passing nothing to thank for, just keep the pretty smile from inside. Thats the best one and taht is also th one taht shines so bright. Smile Jes |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sounds like this could be song lyrics. Take care, and happy holidays! |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
Really puts a smile on ur face doesnt it? Just some advice...poetry doesnt always have to ryhme and for about 2 lines in the poem it showed that maybe you couldve approached the words differently. When poems dont ryhme, they give you a whole lot more options on what to say! But thanks for the lift up!  xoxLORxox |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
Thanks Jes, I enjoyed smiling along with you. Tony.  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Pssst ..... smiling back ay you Jes Hope |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jes, great write! happy holidays, amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A man with a sense of humor... looking forward to what other surprises you have in store for us! |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile i love to sing but i dont know a note smile, but mayeb i should show this to my sis she loves music - thanks for reading iliana True words spoken serenities_blood, but sometimes its not to use other ways it only depends on if people can read what the poet wrote no matter which way he uses the words smile, i would love if you would comment on a few of the poems i made earlier a few are without rhyme, thanks for reading and commenting. Always welcome i love it when people smile that tells alot about them. smile. and thanks for reading Antonio_L Hehhehe thanks for reading i could nearby feel your litle grin and smile there HopeS So Pssst ..... you got another smile. hehheh. Thanks for reading Amy and glad ya enjoyed, and happy holidays back at ya I will do my best to surprise you Sunshine, but glad you got a smile. Thanks all its a pleasure to see when people read the poetry we make, smile thanks again and happy holiday all together. Smile Jes |
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