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Open Poetry #30
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mkcbf
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since 2003-08-12
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0 posted 2003-12-24 07:08 PM

I see gray clouds

Above your head

As when you are sad

What is your matter?

Tell me or mock me

For already I know

Your sorrows

But tell me so I may:

Know my wisdom is of want.

Tell me as a friend... or as

A brother.
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2003-12-24 07:20 PM

Nice writing...James
James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03
Posts 972
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2 posted 2004-01-18 10:57 AM

That feeling of knowing before you know --can be helpful or it can be a burden. You say it wonderfully here and I'm sending this one back to the top for everybody to see.



~~J
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