Open Poetry #30 |
beckoning the light (a solstice prayer) |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
is the vessel's curse thirst the tears appear on stone "fill me" is the test of flesh as hunger teases needs atone "hear me" oh please heed my cry say to me I'm understood "talk to me" I'll curb the tongue and banish fingers from the words that built the barriers. is the vessel's curse. let this cup pass no Let it be... fill the chalice lessening the presence of myself in me living waters filtering impurites of greed... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I see only a brilliant light of good, kindness and love in you m'friend, but enjoyed this winter soltice and your atonement prayer so much. I know you shall be heard, and I shall pray in my way for you to be spoken to and filled. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (12-23-2003 01:13 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*touching the screen* I understand tis right this be me last read ... (good night girlie) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Yes, Karen... you are understood... Love you much, lady... When the power of love overcomes the |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
OH! I love this! I love the whole thing and I'm saving it. You have such a gift. ~K~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"lessening the presence of myself in me" Maybe its not just for you? Maybe some of us out here need more of you and who you are to make us think.. I do understand though. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I understand. Wonderful write. Love ya lady~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Very powerful, from a place that had to be raw. If this continues, you should drink two philtres and call me in the morning. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah yes. "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
:long happy sigh: you can't improve on this one...it's perfect..without a doubt it's a saver. -Adam "beauty is in the eye of the beholder" -Finger Eleven |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
namaste, good people. and chuckling at icebox yet again. gawd I love you people. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just to wish you Happy Winter Solstice dear lady K. |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You were one of the most giving people I ever knew. I'm glad you found the living waters. |
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