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Winter Mask
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Winter Mask |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Autumn has left me again to a frozen winter where once I remembered being beautiful, full of life my soul now empty, left battling courage to take a stand and leave you. How will the next apple look from the falling tree? Purple, yellow, green; my heart-aches knowing how once loved filled my chambers I wonder if springs rebirth this year will erase all color Will my eyes again mask the truth? ~~**~~**~~**~~**~~ May the miracle of Christmas touch your life with special blessing H A P P Y H O L I D A Y S [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (12-13-2003 11:26 PM).] |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
So sadly sweet Greeneyes, and so obviously heart-felt. I hope you find a spring of rebirth. Tony. J |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so beautiful Lauren... Wonderful words from your golden pen. Love ya lady~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwww, I'm sorry you're feeling this way, dearest friend, know we all send angel hugs your way and the spring will bring many flowers to your heart, yay, until then, may you have happy holidays, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
lauren, beautiful, painful, honest write... I hope that the Spring brings for you the strength you need to "walk away" take care. happy holidays. miss you. amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Poignantly beautiful. Eric |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
When we do what's right, the colors return to what they should be. Better gray that's right and true, than a whole spectrum of falsehood. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I know what you mean, I wonder too, where and when the apple will fall, but fall they do, like we have a say?? You always write such choice words that warm up even the coldest days. Love to you, Lady Lauren~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lauren, it sounds as though you may have a difficult winter ahead of you, but please hold on to the thought that with the Spring comes the sun and new growth! ~ the beginning of a new chapter in your life's book! Comforting ~ and understanding ~ hugs, Linda |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Spring is so easy in the north at least for making promises even for oneself. And then the green and the warmth arrive and we are assuaged and forget the cold . . . |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
life's truths are sometimes painful, I know...enjoyed this one  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
bittersweet, lady I hug you |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
the journey has been and will be long....your replies have given comfort....thank you from my heart.... love and peace Lauren~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
L~ from my heart to yours....   |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I tried to find the words yesterday to respond to this... still can't find 'em, and it's my third time here. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
thanks guys, I appreciate the support.... Lauren~ ~~**~~**~~**~~**~~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
wonder if springs rebirth this year will erase all color Will my eyes again mask the truth? This tug's at the heartstrings... A veryyyyyyyy touching write PoetFriendGreeneyes... Thank you for sharing *~coco~* |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
so sad,i think everything will past with the time. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
When spring comes, you'll be there. That's plain to see in you! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Greeneyes, I have to agree with RL on this one. Thanks for sharing it with us. BEEEEwell. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love apples, so it matters not the color, or even if they fall from the tree. A sad but beautiful write, dear poet. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Revisited this jewel |
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