Open Poetry #30 |
Of Leaves and Sleaves |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Of leaves and Sleeves I stay within a valley’s bliss Flown to it upon a Kiss And there I pick the daisies leaves And wipe my tears upon my sleeves. I watch the flowers turn the sun And wish with them that I were one To mirror beauty of the sky To be the wonders hew and lie The trees that dance and twist in awe Sink within my mind of store And whisper me a magic tune That brings me to the near of swoon It’s then my fantasies do stray To stay the wonders of the day And spirits dine in covert mood To eat upon this feast of food I washed my soul within this bliss And all was given in the kiss |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I watch the flowers turn the sun And wish with them that I were one To mirror beauty of the sky To be the wonders hew and lie" Good Morning Sy! Thanks for the sunny starter... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
excellently woven! Always is of course. G'mornin to you sey sir Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi and Good Morning Sy, This was a soft and loving read, gentle as the poet, filled with wisdom...especially liking the following: The trees that dance and twist in awe Sink within my mind of store And whisper me a magic tune That brings me to the near of swoon lovely rhyme how are you doing? Missed you all and your poetry yesterday, then found this site, #30 Sy, I was wondering, since I've been posting here, there was a forum #27, then forum #28, now both of which I believe are no longer available, then forum #29, which hardly anyone was posting in yesterday? Perhaps you can educate me if you will and have the time? Thank you Sy. Have a great day and a wonderful Thanksgiving Day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Good morning Duncan, have a good one. And good morning to you Alyssa. LeeJ, Thank you dear, I can only say the site was down quite a while and he may still be adjusting it. Ask Sunshine she might know. Have a good one. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And there I pick the daisies leaves And wipe my tears upon my sleeves. I watch the flowers turn the sun And wish with them that I were one To mirror beauty of the sky To be the wonders hew and lie The trees that dance and twist in awe Sink within my mind of store And whisper me a magic tune That brings me to the near of swoon ===================================== quote: oh but you are my sweet Sy-guy...you are *winkiewinkie* When I'm with you my eyes are so wide ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Randy and I wish you the happiest of thanksgivings. You will be in both our thoughts. WWRS |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful thoughts... beautiful sentiments... what a way to start the day. And I sent Lee an e-mail! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-25-2003 08:33 AM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful Sy!! There is much power in a kiss. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I watch the flowers turn the sun And wish with them that I were one To mirror beauty of the sky To be the wonders hew and lie The trees that dance and twist in awe Sink within my mind of store And whisper me a magic tune That brings me to the near of swoon" Oooh such a wonderful poem for us this morning Sy! Me thinks I may just swoon as well! Lovely, lovely. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Superbly sense-ational, sweet Sigh the Sonneteer! Fantazzmagorical... Morning hugs, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you sweet and have a very happy holiday. scorpio, I think so, have a happy thanksgiving. Nancy, Have a happy holiday and don't eat too much. Earth Angel, I don't know, do angels observe thanksgiving? Anyway you are the best angel I know. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Awww shuckums, Mr. T.! That sure was a honey-sweet thing for you to say! ~ and yes, we do celebrate Thanksgiving! Afterall, there is soooooo much to be thankful for! ~ even when everything seems topsy turvy at times! However, we Canadian "angels" celebrate Thanksgiving on October 13 th. Actually, that is the Monday holiday. Most of us celebrate it on the Sunday. Our weekly day of thanks giving! Have a glorious Thanksgiving with your loved ones! ~ and please save me a little slice of Isabel's homemade pie! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel It will be our pleasure. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Seymour, this is so beautiful!! Good morning, sweet friend. Is it cold in your part of florida? It froze in Northwest Florida last night. Brrrrrr. Have a good day, Sir. Hugs to you Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-25-2003 11:07 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, No I'm in southern florida and it is still fair. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
The falling of the tear. We will no longer hear. But the smile you can feel. That one is also for real. Smile Jes [This message has been edited by Jes (11-25-2003 12:04 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another excellent piece, with an awesome ending [This message has been edited by passing shadows (11-25-2003 12:34 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Jes. Passing, Glad you liked. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good evening Sy ... wishing you and your lovely bride a very Happy Thanksgiving. I count you among my blessings that I'm thankful for each day. Hugs and Luvs, Marti 'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.' |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, Thank you dear and may you and yours have the happiest of thanksgivings. |
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