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ctowen
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0 posted 2003-11-24 07:38 PM


more than words
more than feelings

... away of life


a dream to catch

the breeze in your face
and against your back,

simultaneous


the littlest thing
and the biggest moment,
all at the same time

inhaling

exhaling

another's being,
absorbing them
through your soul

without trying


neverending

floating timeless,
never pulling a way
or fading

always touching

this is written for
a close friend
whose youngest son
was in a severe car accident
two days ago
and is in
intensive care


to Diana -
all my prayers

One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
James_A_Fraser
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1 posted 2003-11-24 07:57 PM


Adding mine as well.....



~~J

Nightshade
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just out of reach
2 posted 2003-11-24 08:42 PM


Oh dear, how moving and sad. My prayers go out to this young man. Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    



[This message has been edited by Nightshade (11-24-2003 08:44 PM).]

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-11-24 08:51 PM


Please include my prayers as well~
Heart hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2003-11-24 08:53 PM


sorry you had to write of this
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5 posted 2003-11-24 09:44 PM


Praying for you and your friend....I hope her son pulls through this....


soft hugssss
ME~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

suthern
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6 posted 2003-11-25 01:15 PM


Your friends are in my prayers... this is lovely.
Larry C
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7 posted 2003-11-25 08:27 PM


Words of comfort from an awesome friend. May she find peace in your words and courage from your friendship and may her child recover quickly. Peace.
ctowen
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8 posted 2003-11-25 10:12 PM


Thank you all for the read and prayers ...

       A quick update -

          Shaun has gone through several surgeries and
         is now awake and able to squeeze his father's hand.
         Another surgery today allowed him to regain some
         feeling in his legs and a little movement in his
         toes ....


              God Bless You All.

     Thank you Larry, for your words ...
          they mean a lot.

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