Open Poetry #30 |
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a woman equals to suicide |
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borgeN New Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 9Norway |
a woman is made of flesh and blood hopefully like you and me you may, touch her feel her taste her but, a woman this strange creature who dares comprehend her capricious brain? who dares comrehend her inscrutable heart? such action my friend, equals to suicide |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
pretty deep,,,,,but,,,can be true in some cases,,,,,, I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Kazeru Junior Member
since 2003-12-16
Posts 31 |
Indeed it is true that trying to understand some women can be suicide, but is not the same true for men? When you find that special person, there will be no problem understanding each other! I really loved this poem! Greetz Kazeru ->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<- |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
borgeN, pretty deep thinking... Your poem sent me into thought. I think your message applies to anyone you care about, whether it be a friend, a child, or a love. Continue to think, my friend, and take care of yourself. Sadelite [This message has been edited by Sadelite (12-21-2003 11:09 PM).] |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
i agree with the rest of them so far. Deep not in the content of the words, but in the context of them. I can see what you mean behind what you write. Very true as well! xoxLORxox |
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borgeN New Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 9Norway |
thank you all it was not my intend to be deep this is just a fact for most men :-) |
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