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Michelle_loves_Mike
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0 posted 2003-12-20 08:15 PM



A friendship so deep,
no questions asked,,,
an understanding so shared..
over a cup of coffee,
you've held me when i cried,,,
laughed loud at my bad jokes..
given advice,,,
sometimes taken it,,,,,
over a cup of coffee
no subject taboo,
no thoughts hidden,,,
taunts and fun,,,
seriousness and pain,,,
sometimes the coffee gets cold,,,
or doesnt get refilled,,,,,
hours go by,,,
all taken,,,
all given,,,
always my dearest friend,,,
over a cup of coffee

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iliana
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1 posted 2003-12-20 08:19 PM


M-L-M --- this is so true!  Coffee is the uniter of the world!!!   Just kidding, no really, good thought!
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2 posted 2003-12-20 08:35 PM


Some things just wouldn't be the same without a cup of coffee. Liked this!

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

alan6501
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3 posted 2004-01-06 06:46 PM


sometimes the coffee gets cold,,,
or doesnt get refilled,,,,,

I'm not sure if you meant this to be literal or more of a metaphor but either way this really works and love it! I enjoyed the entire poem as well. Though I'll admittedly say I'm not a big fan of coffee (It makes nauseous!) I'll say I do notice how a cup of coffee can somhow bring people together in conversation. Whether it be a tradition or something that comes "naturally". Great read.

xaos
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4 posted 2004-01-06 06:47 PM


Honest moment, the kind we often take for granted!
Lovely

Goodknight
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5 posted 2004-01-06 07:12 PM


Nice poem about a truly wonderful person - that best friend - something we all would love to have - Paul
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6 posted 2004-01-06 07:54 PM


Not to sure about the taste of coffee, but it smells good A poem full of feeling. What more could you ask for??

We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late.


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