Open Poetry #30 |
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A cup of coffee |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania ![]() |
A friendship so deep, no questions asked,,, an understanding so shared.. over a cup of coffee, you've held me when i cried,,, laughed loud at my bad jokes.. given advice,,, sometimes taken it,,,,, over a cup of coffee no subject taboo, no thoughts hidden,,, taunts and fun,,, seriousness and pain,,, sometimes the coffee gets cold,,, or doesnt get refilled,,,,, hours go by,,, all taken,,, all given,,, always my dearest friend,,, over a cup of coffee |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
M-L-M --- this is so true! Coffee is the uniter of the world!!! Just kidding, no really, good thought! |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Some things just wouldn't be the same without a cup of coffee. Liked this! Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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alan6501 Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 89PA |
sometimes the coffee gets cold,,, or doesnt get refilled,,,,, I'm not sure if you meant this to be literal or more of a metaphor but either way this really works and love it! I enjoyed the entire poem as well. Though I'll admittedly say I'm not a big fan of coffee (It makes nauseous!) I'll say I do notice how a cup of coffee can somhow bring people together in conversation. Whether it be a tradition or something that comes "naturally". Great read. ![]() |
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xaos Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 35 |
Honest moment, the kind we often take for granted! Lovely ![]() |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Nice poem about a truly wonderful person - that best friend - something we all would love to have - Paul |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Not to sure about the taste of coffee, but it smells good ![]() We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late. |
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