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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Pelican Dining A pelican plunges headlong, the straining mouth wide for the shock, and this time a fish has blundered in. Looking almost surprised he points his beak high, swallows like a poet reading a bad rhyme. The fish tries to explain. [This message has been edited by Ratleader (11-25-2003 01:52 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 neat |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're wonderfully wicked. I'm not supposed to be spewing coffee on my screen at this time of morning. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ 'swallows like a poet reading a bad rhyme' That is so cool !!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
I like this - I've never read a poem about a pelican before; I consider it a treat to get to read about something that hasn't been done before, or that isn't done often at least. Thanks for being unique. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Interesting poem. Does this mean, we will have a talking Pelican since he swallowed a talking fish. Good one. Love Bon-Bon  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have a delightfully unique sense of humor! I am always amused by your wry and clever twists at the end! lol  Loves 'n laughs, Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LOL Yep, Ed...you are a mess!! ahahahaha |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
good one, enjoyed wishing you a great day, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now you made me laugh so hard I have to run to the bathroom!  you are too funny, too funny...and it's a waste of time trying to 'splain yourself anyway LOL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... I'm chagrined to consider how many of those moments I've given to the poets reading my work! LOL This is classic, my friend... absolutely wonderful! *G* |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so awesome. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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