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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~*~*~ I long to hold the night air in my arms and watch the snow fall in my dreams but the mountains are so high to climb and my emotions are an avalanche cascading in the winter reign. If only I could see beyond the daylight in your eyes and reach you in the starry night shining down on me. I'd take you there and kiss the sky and bathe with you in winter springs just to watch our breath rise. ~*~*~*~ |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
and my emotions are an avalanche cascading in the winter reign. Nicely written. I enjoyed this a bunch. Happy holidays, Sadelite |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
Totally romantic, Blues Serenade, I love it. Tony.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome imagery! you've really got a way with words! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lori, this is really beautiful...you create the most romantic images. **sighs** Happy Holidays, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What a sweet poem... I have a feeling you are moving in new directions as a writer, and maybe as a Lori. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
If he reads this he will follow you unless he has rocks in his head. I could see something different with every line and couldn't wait to read the next one. Kaz |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, I want to see the breath of my lover to know how her heart beats for me and feels for me and loves me deeply and prove to her the same! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, happy holidays, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and my emotions are an avalanche cascading in the winter reign. Aw, hon... have you been peeking in my windows again? *S* This is lovely... and I think the winter of your despair may be giving way... I hope! *S* |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Very, very nice! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
my emotions are an avalanche cascading in the winter reign. OHHHHHHH lori you are writing my soul....this aches but how I so understand!! heart hugs....  pretty ladyLauren~ ~~**~~**~~**~~**~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bluesy -- you really have a way with putting softness and intensity into the same picture -- amazing! HAPPY HOLIDAYS to you! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
your special romantic touch is here..happy holidays to you!  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
wow, this is beautiful. happy holidays, Bluesy. ~K~ |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Blues... This is an incredible, magical write...thank you so much for sharing it. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for your warm replies, you are all just too nice, and I really do appreciate you taking the time read. Well it figures, I have come down with the flu just in time for Christmas!  Gonna go fluff my pillows and have a spot of tea and see if that helps. Happy Holidays everybody!!!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds like a heavenly vision and if only, me too, send me some of that white light |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...such a vision makes me long too. Hugs, you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Lori! Feel better soon sweet lady. Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
A great bit of poetry. Good luck with the flu! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
So much longing here so wonderfully written Lori. p.s I hope you feel better. M fate is not just |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely enchanting write! Beautiful music! Love and light. Margherita |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I'll have to vote with Kaz on this one -- you hit a blue bulls-eye, kid! |
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