Open Poetry #30 |
Cowboys Don't Cry...Very Much |
Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
I grew up a'hearing that cowboys don't cry. It just ain't the right thing to do. A man must be strong, and hold feelin's in... But, partner, those things just ain't true. When I was a kid, and we watched Old Yeller- I must have got dirt in my eye... I was too proud to sit there and beller, Besides which, us cowboy's don't cry. Then in my twenties, my granddaddy passed- And I shook my fist at the sky... And went and got drunk, and mad at the Lord... And muttered, "Real cowboys don't cry". Then in the nineties, my brother was shot... It hurt me to see family die... And then I discovered, what I'd known all along. Sometimes a cowboy does cry. I've altered my saying...at least, just a bit. Emotions will make us do such... What I tell the boys, down at the corrals... Is, "Cowboy's don't cry...very much". |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
But, but...this made me want to cry. :'( Terri~ Merry Christmas Well I will go down with this ship |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
That's a great poem! Thanks for sharing it. And, happy holidays, partner! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
aww you're so right though, we all do need to cry some... and its ok to do that. to be too proud to cry is too proud for me... beautiful though sad Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic write here John. Season's greetings to you and yours. Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You're right John. Emotions can't be bottled up and ignored. There's nothing wrong with being sensitive and showing what's in our hearts. Well written. And Merry Christmas my friend. believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
John, even though this was sad, I did enjoy it. I thionk that it takes a very strong man to show his true emotions. Hugs, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I think it takes a mighty strong cowboy to show his emotions. Gunslinger, this just might be my new favourite write of yours. So, I am putting into my library! hugs, Chris |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww, I think it is okay for even cowboys to cry sometimes. This is a beautiful poem. |
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Minister Joe Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 78TX, USA |
Hi John, Enjoyed your work--and I tell you I listen to a lot of cowboy poets... Waddie Mitchell and such, and those guys if they don't will definitely pull the tears out of you. You have a good rapport with your reader, and the tone of your work is relaxed and honest. Nice job. --Matt |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
John, another amazing write |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
Very powerful and sad, Gunslinger. Sure, cowboys don't cry if the hurt is physical, but for the deep hurt of such a loss, you can cry mister, you can cry. I really liked it. Tony. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I have another saying. Never trust a cowboy that won't cry. Happy holidays, cowboy! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this was sucn a wonderful write, even though a little on the sad side. I think a real cowboy should cry...it shows emotion Happy Holidays, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
sometimes we cry on the inside,,,and only those who know us can see the tears,,,, your poems strikes a chord thank you Michelle |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sweet! Enjoyed this, Gunslinger! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Hey cowboy, you can cry anytime you need to. I like this poem, just like I like everything I've ever read by you. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
John, you are a class act, and this is a great write. Thanx for it...for all the truth of it. Merry Christmas to you... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Wonderfully expressed, John. I enjoy the common thread of sensitivity in all your writing. Happy Holidays. ~K~ |
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