Open Poetry #30 |
A Lover's Duet |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * This is a combined effort between myself and a good poet friend named Steve who posts with me at another site.He begins with the first verse and mine are the alternating verses.I was so humbled that Steve asked to do a duet with me and the end result brought tears to my eyes. * * * My love you're mine I know it's right I saw it in your eyes tonight I felt it in the way you kiss And every day your love I miss You fill each waking moment You're a part of all I do I'd climb the highest mountain In my quest to be with you I bless the day we came to be The day you made the man you see I kiss the ground on which you walk My eyes observe you like a hawk My heart has wings to fly Feet barely touch the floor You've unlocked my deep desires Leaving me breathless for more My life is nought without your love We go together like hand in glove The thought that we might never be A prisoner of life although I'm free Your words are my food As your breath is my wine Your love intensifies all colors Like a diamond, how love shines I feel you close your love entwines My heart is yours for all of time There is no one for me but you Until I die my love is true Your love loosens my limbs And beats warm in every vein It sings sweetly to my heart And will forever by my gain I need you here within my life Maybe as a lover or maybe a wife It matters not just be for me I love the way you set me free I love you more than life itself My passion burns so deep within As I await your tender touch To signal love will soon begin I am in motion |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done....pleased to read this...and wishing you both well. And thanking your partner for giving us this blending of two talents.... |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
Totally beautiful Sue! Tony. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Dear Sue - Thank God you didn't say your friend was Toerag! That's all I gotta say. err.... not really... This is a very sweet poem written by hearts in tune. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We welcome Steve to Passions! A delightful duet! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am sure that Steve is going to be a wonderful addition to Passions, very nice duet you two. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a delightful love poem duet - thanks Sue and Steve - Paul |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
A lovely write, Sue@Steve *warm hugs* |
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Steve Motuel Member
since 2003-12-19
Posts 72Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany |
All I can say is a big thank you for your comments an I am very pleased to be here! Sue, the court is now all yours... Steve |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sue (and Steve, of course) -- this was a beautiful harmony! Thanks for sharing it with me! lol.......jo |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue & Steve...A lovely duet. Thanks for sharing...Paul Steve...Hopefully we will get a chance to read more of your poems soon. "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautifully penned you two! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is very beautiful from two wonderfully romantic writers. You know that I already love to read your poems, Sue... amd I can tell I will love to read the writings from Steve, too. Thank you both for sharing this with us. Hugs to you both, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Sue and Steve, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friends, I wish you both the happiest holidays, this is a most gorgeous collaboration, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Sue and Steve, thank you both for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your wonderful comments and I am sure you will agree that Steve will be a very welcome addition to PIP. Steve - I thank you so very much for writing with me, it was truly an honour on my part. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hello Sue and Welcome Steve ... This is beautiful and you write so well together. I enjoyed this very much. Hugs and Merry Christmas to you both. Marti |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Very nice combined effort. I hope we see more of your cooperative poems. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you Marti & Betty Lou I am so pleased Steve has joined us here and I know you'll make him feel welcome. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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