Open Poetry #30 |
Step Inside Another's Shoes (A Christmas Wish) |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * I see the Christmas shoppers As they hurriedly walk on by Most won't glance my way They cannot look me in the eye They have lost the meaning of Christmas Replaced by presents galore But there is something on my list That can't be brought from a store A gift from the heart Would be something I'd treasure The gift of love is special And is quite simply beyond measure What will I do for Christmas I hear you enquire As the pigeons start circling Above the church spire I hope to get a free meal Just like I did last year The Salvos are my angels They supply my Christmas cheer For me there'll be no presents But that is quite okay Just a smile is all I ask To help brighten up my day * * * "The most emotionally healthy people in our society are able to put themselves into other people's shoes, know how someone else is feeling and care about that. This capacity extends beyond sexual and family intimacy. It creates a circle of genuine feeling that can extend, eventually, to all of humankind" I am in motion |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - very special write this is... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful and touching Christmas write Sue.. one that should apply year round. Happy Holidays dear lady~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sue, you write so well the true meaning of Christmas and what it is to be a truly kind generous person! Seems you know from experience Beautiful write! Hugs and Happy Holidays, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Maybe everybody should spend at least one week living on the streets as if they were homeless...that way they would apreciate just how serious the situation is of being homeless and would be willing to share more of their money to help the homeless...Sue thank you for prompting our thoughts on this subject...the poem was well written..as ever...and has that personal feel to it...thank you for showing us the caring nature of your heart.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lovely write Sue, Happy holidays. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sue - you write this so well - it says a lot - great poem - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this made me cry as it saddens me how so many have forgotten what the true meaning of Christmas is and I pray that just like Mr. Scrooge they can learn their lessons as it is never too late to be redeemed sometime during your life and make a miacle work for someone else unselfishly! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are one of those special people who can feel for everyone, I send mistletoe hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Wasnt it Phil Collins that wrote the hearted song fo a homeless girl, smile. You made the poem that gave me the same feeling with tears in my heart, for all those that doesnt mind, and all my hope for those in need. Liked it smile. Jes |
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Steve Motuel Member
since 2003-12-19
Posts 72Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany |
Sue, this poem is so beautiful yet sad because it points out a few home truths! Christmas for me is not only a religous period and celebration but truely the season of "love to all" I really enjoy the way most folk get to put away their hates and fears and love one another... if we all were to do this then life would be so much better! Take care dearest friend Steve |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
So moving and heartfelt! Hugs and loves, Marti 'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.' |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
Beautifully presented Sue, both the thought, and the words. With a heart like I see here I know you must attract the nicest people. Merry Christmas Sue, Tony. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very touching, Sue. And, beautiful as well. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
that was a really good write RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB- |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I guess we are all guilty of racing around at Christmas without stopping to think of others. I thought it was appropriate that we be reminded how lucky we are. As my father once told me, "There is always someone worse off than me" and those words speak so many truths. I wish all my fellow poets and friends here at PIP a joyous Christmas and a New Year filled with lots of love and happiness. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Something for us all to think about I believe. Wonderfully written, Sue. "When your life is tossed and turning |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Lone Wolf Thank you so much, your comment is so much appreciated. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Such a kind and thoughtful poem. What a shame there are so many homeless people and as much as people do for them at Christmas, they are often forgotten during the rest of the year. Merry Christmas to you! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Betty Lou Your words are always so welcome and so very much appreciated. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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