Open Poetry #30 |
Earth's Angel |
Poweranimals New Member
since 2003-12-22
Posts 3 |
-Earth's Angel A glimpse into your eyes hold the fire of my heart. Why is it such pain I feel when we are apart? When I see your face, my heart begins to race. Like waters overflowing, by you my heart longs to be embraced. But your love is just a dream, as your beauty is without measure. For, your friendship, I will forever treasure. Perhaps my love, you may never know. But I can only hope that in my eyes it shows. To risk my heart for what might not be. Why don't I try, for hope you'll see? Perhaps, for now, ignorance is bliss. Hoping and waiting for true love's first kiss. I hope someday to win your love. You're like an angel from above. Forever in my heart.. I love you. |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
I can see so much emotion in there. I hope that who ever you wrote that for reads it and falls for you instantly. Good luck and WELL DONE! I like your work. xoxLORxox |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is such a beautiful and loving poem I also hope the intended sees it. Thanks for sharing your heart. Hugs Ethel |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This truly is a bittersweet ache isn't it> The one good thing is that friends first, lovers next, is sure a good combination for that forever love. So nicely written for your first posting. Good luck and I do hope one day this person sees this. Happy Holidays to you, and welcome to the family of Passions. Happy Holidays |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Its always nice for friendship to bloom into love...isn't it....I take from your name you like animals....and angels... You should read about them sometime, there are great books on the topic of angels...by your poem, it seems as though you have already read up on them.... Welcome to Passions...I am sure she will like it! There is no other honor than to have poems written just for you....I should know I have had one-hundred....great presents from ones heart! Hope to see more of your poems.... ~ARH |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi, and Welcome to Passions. We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family…. please check your email for a special greeting Kindly Greeneyes~ ~~**~~**~~**~~**~~ |
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Poweranimals New Member
since 2003-12-22
Posts 3 |
Thanks guys. I'm glad you liked it. I hope she likes it too, if I ever find the courage to show her. [This message has been edited by Poweranimals (12-22-2003 02:49 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I have been thinking about this all day...and glad I can finally reply. Welcome to Passions... The bravest poetry pours right from the heart... Live your dreams. ThisDiamond |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poweranimals Welcome and enjoyed your write. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
nicely done...enjoyed it :-) RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB- |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Bump! Merry Christmas to you and your angel. TD |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoy your read |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A passionate post...James |
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